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Feedback from a friend
Palwasha
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-Harpreet
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Palwasha
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Questions:
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2) Unclear.
3) Not a lot of consistency of ideas. But lights are used in all of the products (streetlights) which all link together. Makeup style for poster and digipack are completely different in styles and colours and connote different things. Try changing the colours so the connotations match up with each other.
4) Included bar code. Included band website and record company website. Challenged the conventions by putting makeup on the male band members.
5)List of improvements to be made to the video:
- Add missing shots. (Bottle smashing etc)
- Shorten intro or add sounds/ sound effects to intro. (Maybe the music could start as soon as the ear phones are plugged in?)
6) Digi pack improvements:
- Links to digi pack and music video needs to be clearer.
7) Advert Improvements:
- More information needed.
- Font needs to be changed.
- Makeup needs to link with music video and digi pack.